She was a typical kind of girl,
just an ordinary, run of the mill kind of girl.
Nothing fancy, nothing elegant, simply her.
She had a common job as a cocktail waitress
earning her living at the usual kind of bar –
serving men who treated her cruel.
In her regular way she battled the demons of her past.
They drove her on in her average same old existence,
and it became ordinary to her.
She had been a typical kind of girl,
just an ordinary, run of the mill kind of girl.
Now she was lost, mediocre, barely adequate –
a below average kind of girl.
In mediocrity she dwells,
all alone in the bowels of life.
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This poem is in response to Linda’s Stream of Consciousness Saturday prompt which was to use the word “average.” We were to use it as our theme or try to stick the word in somewhere. It’s up to you. Have at it! EVERYONE CAN PARTICIPATE IN THIS CHALLENGE:
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Here are the rules:
1. Your post must be stream of consciousness writing, meaning no editing, (typos can be fixed) and minimal planning on what you’re going to write.
2. Your post can be as long or as short as you want it to be. One sentence – one thousand words. Fact, fiction, poetry – it doesn’t matter. Just let the words carry you along until you’re ready to stop.
3. There will be a prompt every week. I will post the prompt here on my blog on Friday, along with a reminder for you to join in. The prompt will be one random thing, but it will not be a subject. For instance, I will not say “Write about dogs”; the prompt will be more like, “Make your first sentence a question,” or “Begin with the word ‘The’.”
4. Ping back! It’s important, so that I and other people can come and read your post! For example, in your post you can write “This post is part of SoCS:” and then copy and paste the URL found in your address bar at the top of this post into yours. Your link will show up in my comments, for everyone to see. The most recent pingbacks will be found at the top.
5. Read at least one other person’s blog who has linked back their post. Even better, read everyone’s! If you’re the first person to link back, you can check back later, or go to the previous week, by following my category, “Stream of Consciousness Saturday,” which you’ll find right below the “Like” button on my post.
6. Copy and paste the rules (if you’d like to) in your post. The more people who join in, the more new bloggers you’ll meet and the bigger your community will get!
7. Have fun!
Thanks for visiting. I always love hearing from each and every one of you!
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I like it! Well done.
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Thank you. I am on a creativity roll 😀
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Nice, Colleen, and so true of what life can be like. Thanks for this! 🙂
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Thank you Linda! ❤
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A sad story, very well written.
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Thanks Meredith. ♤
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You bring the girl to life. Love the red hair in the graphic.
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Thank you. So many girls end up like this. We must never settle for ordinary. Glad you liked this. ♡
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