February 22, 2018, Carrot Ranch Flash Fiction prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story about a unicorn. It can be realistic or fantastical. Go where the prompt leads.
Respond by February 27, 2018, to be included in the compilation (published February 28). Rules are here. All writers are welcome!
As an archeologist, I spent hours looking for the bony remains of ancient creatures. Today, my frustration mounted. The land yielded nothing. If I didn’t find something valuable soon my funding would end.
A dry wind blew eddies of grit across a long, twisted object lodged in the ground. I brushed away the sand unveiling the skeleton of a prehistoric horse with a horn projecting from its skull. My trepidation mounted. Who would believe I had unearthed the bones of a mythological creature – a unicorn?
I felt the tremors of the earthquake begin as the land reclaimed my secret.
© 2018 Colleen M. Chesebro
Enjoy this magical day! ❤
Oh no! No one will believe you now!!!! Great flash Colleen!!!!
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Thanks, Ritu. I had such a hard time making this a story. The earth holds her secrets near. ❤
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She does Indeed 🌏💜
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I can dig it!
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LOL! Wouldn’t that be the find of the century? 😀 ❤
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smiles * you must mean.. WILL BE the find of the century…
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LOL! 😀 You know me so well! Ha, ha! 😀
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Love it!
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Whew! Thank you. It took some doing to make it a story. ❤
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Lovely story, Colleen 🙂
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Thanks, Jane. You know, writing flash fiction is like writing our poetry. Every word and syllable matter. ❤
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It should. That’s why writing flash fiction is such a good exercise for novelists.
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I agree. I’ve learned so much in the last couple of years after writing my first novel. Wow! ❤
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We never stop learning. Or we shouldn’t.
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That’s my goal… 😀
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🙂
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The perfect end to the story! 💜
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Ohhh… this was tough. I struggled with the ending. So glad you enjoyed. ❤
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I really did 💜😱
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Thanks, tons, Willow. ❤
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💜💜
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A perfect picture of the “thrill of victory and the agony of defeat.” Read it aloud to my husband.
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That is the highest praise! Thank you. ❤
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Oooh, how exciting!
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Glad you enjoyed.
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I love anyone who can do this!! Telling a story in exactly 99 words?! It’s amazing! Great flash, I really enjoyed it!
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Thanks. I’m loving the challenge. Much appreciated. ❤️
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Always best to let the mystery be…(K)
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It seemed the best way. 🦄❤️
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Lovely flash Colleen, I’m writing mine this morning to share too. Finding it tricky…. Also writing my prologue to Book 2, Curse of Time! 🙂
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What fun, Marje. Yes, I found the flash subject to be tricky also. I wanted to be different. 😀
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I wandered into CarrotRanch today. Not even sure how I got there. I tried the challenge. Great fun! But my contribution is probably too typically boring. lol Love what you did! I’ll get the hang of it!
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LOL! Good for you. I love those inspirational posts. It’s a real challenge to put something together with 99 words. I’m so glad you got involved. ❤
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Thank you. It’s fun!
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Some secrets are better uncovered. We can then imagine unicorns/dragons etc. the way we want them to, without the fetters of ‘reality’.
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
THIS MAKES MY MONDAY MAGICAL, TOO!
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Wow! Thanks for the wonderful compliment. ❤
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Some secrets are meant to be kept. Love this one.
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Thanks, Lisa. You totally get it! Just because you haven’t seen it… doesn’t make it less real. ❤ 😀
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The earth and the Lady Lake both hold their secrets! What a glimpse, though. Your story had an Indiana Jones feel to it, Colleen!
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It’s worthy of longer story… ❤
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This flash and its character are worthy of exploration, Colleen. I made my novel character an archeologist and I have had the greatest fun exploring her profession, even going to archeology field school. In fact, one of the archeologists that I met and who has been a beta-reader for me lives in Colorado. Ha! Maybe we can start a new genre!
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I love it! Archeological fantasy! HA! My Heart Stone Chronicles are based off of a magical calcite stone… I love rocks. I really do need to work on this story in more depth. I’m trying to get book 2 finished first. LOVE it, Charli! ❤
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Focus on Book 2! We share a common love of gifts from the earth. 🙂
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It’s akin to the “Yeti” bones find that trended recently. Though that ended up being an obscure species of bear.
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LOL! This was so fun. Hard to get it all in with only 99 words! 😍
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