
The Carrot Ranch Flash Fiction challenge for January 31, 2019, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story about sea mist. How does it create an environment for a story? It can set the stage or take the stage. Go where the prompt leads.
Respond by February 5, 2019.

I walk along the sandy path strewn with starfish and seashells which seems to beckon me toward the sea. Pearls and aquamarine crystals dot the trail. The salt water scent of the sea mist wafts over me as the sound of stormy waves crashing against stony cliffs draws me closer to my goal.
I imagine the mer-people, undines, water nymphs, and sirens who assist with the flow of life, balancing emotions with healing, cleansing, love, and beauty. I can’t help but wonder how I got here.
Childish dreams bring hope—
as past and present conspire
to present new paths.
©2019 Colleen Chesebro

Happy Saturday, my friends. ❤
Reblogged this on anita dawes and jaye marie.
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Thanks so much, Jaye. You’re the best. ❤
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So lovely sis 💜
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Thanks, Sis. I could see this all in my crazy brain. LOL!
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Love your crazy brain ❤️
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LOL. Thanks. I do wonder where this all comes from sometimes. ❤
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Wonderful Colleen! Hope you had a nice weekend? Wish you a great new week too. Perhaps sometimes we could make a “brain exchange”, than i could become a such fantastic metricist too. Best wishes, Michael
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LOL! Michael, you’re so funny. You must write about things that bring you joy. You can do it! ❤️
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Really, Colleen! Thank you! 🙂 I will try to get an overview over the metrics. Hand on the heart. Michael
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Makes you want run barefoot through sand and sea. The water elementals are certainly present in this piece. 🐬🐬🐬
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LOL! Exactly my thoughts when I read yours, Jan. I wanted to stand with arms raised to the sea mists! ❤
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Fabulous!
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It really does!
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Most certainly!
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Your voice is serenity
Your words so soothingly strung. Thank you for this moments respite
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Violet… thank you. What a lovely thing to say. ❤
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Nicely done – it is beautiful
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Thank you. I hope its dreamlike… my dreams are much crazier than this. LOL!
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It sure is. Dreams needs to be crazy, otherwise there is no fun 😊
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That is so true! LOL! 😀
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😊🌸🤗
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What beautiful words.
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Thanks, Brenda. ❤
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What an underwater dream, Colleen!
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LOL! Wouldn’t that be the best? I had a crazy dream the other night. I think I need to meditate more. LOL! ❤
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As long as you share such stories, we don’t mind… lol!
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LOL! I’m happy you enjoyed 🥰
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Beautifully written ♥
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Thank you. 😍
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Beautiful, Colleen. What a lovely take on the prompt. You transported me there. 🙂
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Now that’s a compliment! Thanks, Diana. 😍🙏🏻❤️
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There’s nothing as uplifting as the sea. This is beautiful, Colleen ❤
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I’m more of a mountain girl but this spoke to me today. I could see it all in my mind. 🥰
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Splendid imagery, Colleen! You took me to the beach, and I was watching it all. ❤
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Thanks, Dorinda. I hope you could smell the salt air.❤️
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I could, it was wonderful!! ❤
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Yea! 😍❤️
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Delightful! I could smell that wonderful seaweed as I read my way through your story and found my way into the poem 🙂
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Thank you. I love visual descriptions and the Haibun is perfect for that. ❤️
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Lovely. Who cares how one gets to an idyllic place like this, as long as you end up living in the moment to the fullest.
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Thank you. A lovely dream, indeed. ❤️
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This is delightful, Colleen.
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Thanks, Robbie. I’m finding my voice by writing in the first person. It’s quite interesting. ❤
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I see the path so clearly, all the details lighting the way to a place of feminine energy and healing.
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Exactly… where this stuff comes from, I don’t know, but I like it. LOL! ❤
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From the sea, from the sea… 🙂
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And, I’m not an ocean girl. I prefer the mountains and the sylphs. 😍
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Ha! Well, then let me change that to, “from the peaks, from the peaks.”
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LOL! 🤣🤣🤣
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I love the mystical quality of your sea mist story, Colleen. Your poetic conclusion is perfect.
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Thanks, Norah. I love the freedom that the Haibun offers in the prose part. So fun. I love these challenges. ❤
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It’s great to have the freedom to respond to the challenges in ways that suit our styles best. 🙂
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I agree. ❤️
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Love it! 💙
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Awww, Thank you. ❤
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