
Frank Tassone’s Haikai challenge for this week asks us to write the haikai poem of our choice (haiku, senryu, haibun, tanka, haiga, renga, etc.) that alludes to the Autumn (Spring) equinox (shunbun).
Click HERE to find Frank’s challenge post.
I’ve added a bit of prose to my solo renga as it slipped out of my thoughts. Autumn is my favorite time of the year!

Mabon Blessings
Happy Mabon! The autumnal equinox shifts the wheel of the year another step closer to Samhain and the Pagan new year. The signs of change are subtle in the desert this time of year. The Saguaro cactus stands tall and green, silent sentinels witnessing the passage of time.
Now, the heat doesn’t seem as intense as it once did, even though the noonday sun blazes bright in the hazy sky. The nights are also cooler, arriving sooner each day as peach and magenta sunsets signal the end of day.
the tired sunflowers—
once tall and strong in August
droop with heavy heads
dense seeds ready to return
to the soil, whence they began
©2020 Colleen M. Chesebro
Reblogged this on GrannyMoon's Morning Feast.
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Many Mabon blessing to you, Granny Moon. Thank you for your kindness! ❤
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this is so sweet and kind post, thank you for sharing!!
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Thank you, Mihran. Glad you enjoyed. ❤
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Awesome, awesomely clear, and double-awesomely conveyed. Wonderful work.
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Thank you! I’m still learning the renga. It’s quite fun to work with.
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We were in AZ a few years ago. Took a drive through some cacti forests… I read that each arm is about 50 years old. Some of them had more arms than a moose has antlers!
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Exactly! The Sonoran desert is so pretty. I live near some foothills on the far western side of Phoenix. The cactus are everywhere.
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I love this Colleen, you have captured the feel of the prompt. 💜
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Thanks, Willow. In haiku, there is always a wistfulness I like to convey of the passing of one season into another. ❤
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Beautifully done 💜
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Thank you. ❤
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🧚💜🍂
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It’s a comfort to think that the sunflowers’ drooping heads will release seeds into the earth to grow again, rather than just whither and die.
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It’s the circle of life isn’t it? ❤️
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Yes, it is. 🙂
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You show us that even the southwest ahs signs of autumn. It’s my favorite season, as well – both weather and colors.
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I love Autumn. I do miss the fall colors and cool crisp mornings. 🍂🍁
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You are mistress of poetry ❤ xx
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LOL! 😍❤️
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Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #2: Colleen Chesebro’s latest #haibun / solo #renga for my current #Haikai Challenge!
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Thanks, Frank. I love your challenges!
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You capture the weariness of the year.
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Especially this year! 🤦🏼♀️🥰
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I must be one of the few people on the planet who hasn’t experienced any problem with the covid at all.
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We’ve not had covid, but I’ve plenty of friends whose family members have. Like you, my husband and I are rather reclusive. I spend time writing and reading. I’m not big on going out to eat. Weight Watchers is my friend. LOL! 😀
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The last time we went out to eat was in 2017 when a friend was over. That was the second and last time we ate out in Bordeaux in twelve years.
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I love your image of the sunflowers in transition. (K)
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I know this is a pixabay image, one that I saved. This photo really speaks to me. The colors, the composition… there’s so much poetry there. 😀 ❤
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Beautiful, Colleen! The sunflowers might be weary, but there’s hope in the seeds for new blooms.
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Exactly… Everything is a cycle of time passage. What might seem bad or disheartening right now, will cycle and bloom again. Thanks, Merril. I’m having fun with this solo renga form. ❤
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Beautiful descriptions, Colleen. Enjoyed reading your post. 🙂
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Aishwarya, thank you. Descriptions make our poetry relatable to others. ❤
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Very true, Colleen. 🙂
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Beautiful, Sis! Happy Autumn! ❤
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Happy Autumn, Sis. It’s still hot here! LOL! 😀
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The temp. has gotten a little milder here, at least in the evenings. 😉
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I keep waiting. At least the 117 F. is gone for now. Whew… it was a rough summer. Glad you are getting some relief. But all those storms in the Atlantic! YIKES! ❤
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I know, right? I hope none of those storms hit land. I don’t know how much more we can take this year.
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Exactly… Stay safe. That’s all you can do. ❤
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Sounds beautiful where you are. I love those huge sunflowers.. so showy. Love how you describe them. They do look like bowed heads in the end. A graceful exit.
Pat
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Thanks, Pat. I’m hoping to grow some sunflowers next year. We’re west of Phoenix but the heat was horrible this year. ❤️
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They seem pretty hardy so you might have some luck with them. ♥️
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In this brutal sun… I’m not sure. Most of my plants that are desert rated struggled to survive this year even with the drip system and additional daily hand watering. It’s the sun that does it. ❤
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Ah, yes. You guys do get to over 100.. I can’t even imagine that. When I was in Sedona it felt downright cool in addition to being magical😊
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Sedona is higher in elevation, and yes, I love that magical place! We were over 117 for a few days. You just hide in the air conditioning. 😀
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Oh wow! … I guess so. I wouldn’t do well there at all. I love my seasonal changes.😊
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Believe it or not, we do have seasonal changes. ARound December it starts to get cold. I walk early in the morning wearing a full winter coat. It gets cold in the desert! LOL!
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LOL, one of the fun, peculiar things about the desert 😊
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