
yellow daffodil grows static in a wet field prairie swamp grasses undulate below springtime— nature revives fresh shoots waiting to rise leaves burst forth in celebration aglow breathe deep the scents and sounds of birdsong serenades white pear blossoms ready to burst just let go... © Colleen M. Chesebro
An almost perfect cinquain series (I had to add one word to make it 44 words) for Dverse Poets Quadrille #151, with Mish as the host. The word to include was static. I took poetic liberty with a bit of rhyming…
Here’s how to join in:
- Write a 44 word poem sans title including the word “static” and post it on your blog or website.
- Enter your name and direct link to your poem in Mr. Linky.
- Follow the links to other poets. Read, comment and come back later as the prompt is open all week.
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- Drop in to say hello in our discussion below.
- Have fun!
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This is lovely. I like the way you remind us of all the movement of Spring, even beneath the static daffodil. Thanks for joining in.
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Thanks so much. It was a cold walk today but spring wants to burst!
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Seeing daffodils is always cause for celebration, particuarly of the poetic variety!
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Especially when it’s so cold and damp. I’m freezing today! 🥳😂
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It’s chilly here today, too. My husband is trying to wean me off the space heater on the three-season porch. Not happening.
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Ha, we still have the heat on. It’s just too cold, damp, and rainy to go without it. It’s 51 degrees but doesn’t feel warm at. I can sympathize with you totally! ❤
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🙂
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Beautiful! ❤️
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Thanks, not a true cinquain that last stanza. 😂
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This had a lovely flow, Colleen. I loved the undulating prairie grass.
You will like an upcoming dVerse prompt (not one from me). 😏
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I’m trying to write more poetry so I look forward to it. 💖
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💙
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🧚🏻♀️beautiful 🧚
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Thank you, Ruth. That lone daffodil brightened up the landscape. ❤
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Nicely done!
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Many thanks. 💜
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This had a beautiful flow and a daffodil will brighten anyone’s day, even if it is static!
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how lovely!
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😊 David 💜
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😁
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You’ve painted a perfect spring scene. (K)
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It was a lovely walk yesterday. Quite brisk and damp with a light mist. Today we have rain. I’ll have to mow the grass by the weekend. LOL! 😀
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We’re having lots of rain too, but so good to see the flowers.
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We’re lagging behind in the flower department, but next week it all will burst!
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Beautiful. fragrant.
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Thanks so much, Jude. ❤
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Interesting where a single bulb will shine.
I thought the squirrels had eaten some of my bulbs by the base of one of my trees. But some bloomed and an odd one that I hadn’t planted along another border area… maybe that was the squirrels work too? 💖
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It could be. Those squirrels can be little buggers. LOL! 😀
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Indeed! 🐿🐿🐿
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Great to achieve this with so many constraints
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Thanks. It was so close.
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Well done with all those constraints
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Thank you.
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This is delightful! Wonderful cinquains and quadrille (rules are made to be broken)!
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Ha, ha! That’s what I thought! One word wouldn’t matter too much. Thanks so much. ❤️
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