
The Carrot Ranch August 28, 2022, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story that features a red convertible.
Who is driving or riding? Where is the car going? Maybe it isn’t even a car.
Have fun and go where the prompt leads! Rules HERE.
Submit by September 3, 2022.
Shadows patterned the tree-lined road into the boneyard. I stood at the entrance, confused at how I’d arrived there.
The last thing I remembered was holding a gun. I shook my head. My memories had vanished like smoke in the wind. A cold lump twisted in my gut.
I paused when I heard a car approach. A red convertible turned into the driveway entrance and stopped. From the radio, Polka music blared, hurting my ears.
Breaking news abruptly interrupted the song. “The Ridgeway killer is dead.”
The door swung open. “Get in,” Satan purred. “I’m your ride to damnation.”
© Colleen M. Chesebro

Oh, excellent twist!
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Thanks, Margaret. 😍
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Wow! There is a whole story wanting to be told here, Colleen!
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Thanks, Olga. 99 word stories are so to create. 😂
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Love the twist!
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Thanks. It made me laugh.
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I hate it when that happens… 😉
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LOL! 😂
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I never saw him as a polka kind of guy.
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I have no idea where that came from but it seemed to fit the story. 🤣
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Gary Larson: Welcome to Hell. Here’s your accordion.
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LOL! The accordion 🪗 fits! 🤣
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I love the ending twist
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Thanks, Sadie. I had fun!
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You’re most welcome
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Good to see the killer getting his just reward!
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Ha ha! I had fun with this one!
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I could hear the evil chortle . . .
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🤣
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Yeeeow. Good one Colleen. 😁
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Thanks, John. I admit, I made myself laugh with this one. 😂
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I’m sure.
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LOL!
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😁
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Wow! Great twist!
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Thanks, Franci. 🥰
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My pleasure, Colleen! 💕
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Wow, great story, Colleen, fantastically written!
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Thanks so much, Erika. I had fun with this one. 💜
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That’s obvious!
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LOL!
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That was a lot of fun, Colleen! Liked the polka twist…lol
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Thanks, Denise. I have no idea where that came from, but it seemed to fit. LOL!
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I can see you had a lot of fun writing this, Colleen. That twist is great. When I see a red convertible car, I’ll now run for my life.
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Hugh, it was a moment of (brilliance??) LOL! Sometimes I have no idea where these ideas come from. The polka music is something I grew up with. Somehow it fit. LOL!
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Fantastic story, Colleen. Great twist at the end!
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Thanks Nichole. I definitely had fun. LOL!
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Oooh. So creepy and dark, Colleen. Loved this! And I had no idea Satan drove a red convertible. 🙂
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I really don’t know where this stuff comes from sometimes. But, I laughed with delight writing this. LOL!
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I don’t know where it comes from either, Colleen, but how wonderful to have such vivid imaginations, right? Lol
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That’s what I say about your books every time I read one!! I can write a snapshot flash fiction story. I struggle with expanding my ideas into a sustainable story. You’ve got that down perfectly.
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Thanks for the kind comment, Colleen. I don’t get how it works either. Lol.
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LOL! Your books are always fabulous!
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I’m hoping like the play ‘Damn Yankee’s’ that damnation isn’t where ‘YOU’ (in the story has to go). There are a few times – at least in fiction, where Satan doesn’t win. 😉
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LOL! Of course I meant hell… but damnation sounded better. 😀
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Yup. 🙂
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Fantastic, Colleen – so much in so few words. Toni x
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Thanks, Toni. I have so much fun with these 99-word stories.
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Lol Sis, loved where you went with this! ❤
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Thanks. I had fun! 🤣
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❤
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Loved this ☺️
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Thanks so much, Reena. 🥰
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Satan in a red convertible works! The loud polka music is pure deviltry, hell on wheels.
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Thank you so much. I grew up with polka music and have always had fun with it at weddings and such. But I had to turn it upside down to portray the devil in a new light.
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Oh wow, Colleen. Now that’s a story. I don’t want a ride in that red convertible!
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LOL! I didn’t want the devil to be cliché. Thanks so much for reading.
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You succeeded in your aim. 🙂
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Thank you.
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