For dVerse: Today’s (Yesterday’s) Poetics, Sanaa wants us all to write in the style of the Beat Generation. Pour out the first thought, the first thing that comes to mind, and let the words take you forward.
I’m more of a syllabic poet, but I’d like to give this a try…
I can't stand all the hypocritical double talk the politics that no one understands while men in jackboots march and grandstand yet multitudes seem to just follow the flock I can't stand the lack of food at the stores shelves are empty; freezer cases bare If I ask questions, they tell me I'm a bore meanwhile, most of us are living on prayers I can't stand the lack of compassion women and children living on the streets while the Kardashian's worry about fashion we're left dealing with governmental cheats © Colleen M. Chesebro
You handled the challenge very well Sis!
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It’s a start… thanks, Sis 🥰
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Well said, Colleen!
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Thanks, Franci… I never know with rhyming verse. 💜
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Most welcome, Colleen!
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I like this, Colleen. Yes, and those “men in jackboots” are mostly all Caucasian white men, wannabe rich or think they are, dressed in dark suits and ties.
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Yes! It’s terrifying that history repeats!
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I agree with you: I can’t stand all the hypocritical double talk too.
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It’s hard to shut it out. I often just walk away.
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It’s a sad state of affairs. (K)
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It is. It seems like the world is in for some rough times.
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I suspect you are right.
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Well done 👍 you have inspired me to try this challenge! 💗
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Excellent! It’s a difficult style of poetry for me., but I bet you will be fabulous!🧡
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🥰
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It’s a terrible time. This poem rings true.
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Thank you. It’s a scary time for the world.
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I can’t stand them either. Very well expressed.
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Thank you. I dislike the closed mindedness. It’s all so negative. We should be taking care of each other. 🧡
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Yes we should and despite all that’s going on in the world today, we don’t learn this.
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I know… it makes me sad.
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Me too and frustrated
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We’ll have to keep spreading the positive energy. 🧡
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Absolutely! I’m trying my best 💜
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Me too! 💜 🙏🏻
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🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼
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Oh yes the hypocritical double talk gets under the skin! This is such a powerful rendition, Colleen. Thank you so much for adding your voice to the prompt 💘💘
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Thank you. I appreciate your kind words. This was a lovely way to practice. 🧡
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The hypocrisy and the people who follow. I can’t stand it either!
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This was much harder to write than I thought it would be. It’s all good practice. ❤️
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Yes, all good practice!
I’ll probably do today’s dVerse prompt.
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I learn so much from you and Jane… Kerfe, too.
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😘
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Quite heartfelt and poignant.
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These rhymes are hard for me. But, it’s fun trying new things. I’m slowly getting more comfortable with rhymes. Slowly. LOL!
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That’s great to hear. Rhyme serves a purpose. Find it in each poem and it becomes fun.
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I’m working on it… I still like syllabic poetry best, but everyone must learn to spread their wings. 💚
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