#WDYS, Challenge #155, haiku

Posted on 10 Oct 2022 by Colleen M. Chesebro

This haiku is for Sadje’s What Do You See challenge. Check out her post HERE. Thanks for the inspiration and for hosting Sadje. 🙏🏻

Image credit; Shahzin Shajid @ Unsplash


a shared path 
in mid autumn fog
time stands still

© Colleen M. Chesebro

29 thoughts on “#WDYS, Challenge #155, haiku”

Sadje 10 Oct 20221:04 pm

So sweet and succinct Colleen. Love this. Thanks for joining in.

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1. Colleen M. Chesebro 10 Oct 20221:06 pm
  
  Thank you, Sadje. It’s great fun!
  
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  1. Sadje 10 Oct 20221:07 pm
    
    You’re most welcome 🙏🏼
    
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Annette Rochelle Aben 10 Oct 20221:59 pm

If I never saw the photo. I could imagine it reading your words! ❤

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1. Colleen M. Chesebro 10 Oct 20222:30 pm
  
  That’s perfect. I wast trying to get two meanings out of the haiku. I think it makes sense. LOL!
  
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Liz Gauffreau 10 Oct 20222:03 pm

I love your haiku, Colleen. Fog and mist have very positive connotations for me.

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1. Colleen M. Chesebro 10 Oct 20222:29 pm
  
  Thanks, Liz. I like them, as well. They are so atmospheric.
  
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  1. Liz Gauffreau 10 Oct 20222:57 pm
    
    You’re welcome, Colleen.
    
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2. Colleen M. Chesebro 10 Oct 20222:30 pm
  
  Liz, check out this blog: https://hokku.wordpress.com/2022/10/10/parting/. It’s EXCELLENT.
  
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  1. Liz Gauffreau 10 Oct 20224:38 pm
    
    Thanks, Colleen. I just took a cruise around David’s site. I like how he’s addressed incompatible languages situation. It makes sense.
    
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    1. Colleen M. Chesebro 11 Oct 20229:49 am
      
      Yes!! I like the different interpretations. Also, you see the dilemma with haiku and syllable count, kigo, etc. It all makes sense.
      
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memadtwo 10 Oct 20227:40 pm

It does. (K)

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michnavs 10 Oct 202211:40 pm

its beautiful Colleen.

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1. Colleen M. Chesebro 11 Oct 20229:40 am
  
  Thank you! I love the fog…
  
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judeitakali 11 Oct 202212:57 am

Beautifully done.

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1. Colleen M. Chesebro 11 Oct 20229:39 am
  
  Thanks, Jude. 💜
  
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  1. judeitakali 11 Oct 202212:32 pm
    
    A pleasure.
    
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RuthScribbles 11 Oct 20227:33 am

Oy! Challenging for sure!

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1. Colleen M. Chesebro 11 Oct 20229:33 am
  
  Oh, there is so much in this image. 😀
  
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Eugenia 11 Oct 20229:50 am

Beautifully written, Colleen! 💖

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1. Colleen M. Chesebro 11 Oct 20229:52 am
  
  Thanks so much, Franci. 💜
  
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D. Wallace Peach 12 Oct 202210:16 am

Beautiful, Colleen. I love where you went with the image. It’s “timeless” and so tender.

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1. Colleen M. Chesebro 12 Oct 202210:43 am
  
  Thanks, Diana. I love those fog images. They’re so expressive.
  
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  1. D. Wallace Peach 12 Oct 202210:56 am
    
    I recall that we’re both fans of fog. Lol
    
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    1. Colleen M. Chesebro 12 Oct 20221:18 pm
      
      LOL!
      
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Indira 14 Oct 20221:13 pm

Sweet and succinct, indeed. Beautifully written.

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1. Colleen M. Chesebro 14 Oct 20221:14 pm
  
  Thank you so much, Indira. 💜
  
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  1. Indira 14 Oct 20221:14 pm
    
    My pleasure, dear.
    
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