I wrote this for TheWombwellRainbow #PoeticFormChallenge, #Dizan, but I believe that the challenge ended. So, here’s a new form for you. This was great practice, by the way! Try something new!
We write the Dizain in ten lines, with ten syllables in each line. It has a rhyme scheme of ababbccdcd. There is another version with Eight lines: Rhyming: ababcdcd.

Here is my poem below:
amongst green grasses, the day's veiled warmth hides in fields of turned earth, seeded with new life against sapphire sky, dove's silver wings glide over forests where cold cuts like a knife hills rimmed with hoarfrost, Jack's wayward wife seasons turn, spokes in the wheel of the year Autumn's harsh gusts nudge another year near time slows for none, our shadows, simple dreams in the darkest hours we embrace our fears these ever-changing days, look for sunbeams © Colleen M. Chesebro
It is wonderful to see the fun you are having with the different poetry forms!
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I still struggle with rhymes, but it’s fun trying new forms. Thanks so much, Sis. 💜
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You’re on a roll, Colleen. (K)
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I wanted to try some new forms… those rhymes still get me, but its fun trying. LOL!
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Rhymes are not my forte either, but it is good to attempt them now and then.
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Finding the right words that rhyme with what your message is… 😳
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Beautiful poem Colleen
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It took me awhile with the end rhymes, but I enjoyed the process. LOL! Thank you. 🧡
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You’re most welcome! I cannot rhyme so I always write free verse.
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That’s why I like my syllabic poetry. Most of them don’t rhyme. LOL! 😀
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👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
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What beautiful, delicate writing! ❤
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Thank you. I appreciate your comment. 💜
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Thanks so much for the lovely share. ❤️
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I loved the poetry. It was wonderful.
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Thanks so much. It was a new form, but I had fun working with those darn rhymes. LOL!
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You did well dear Colleen and you are welcome.
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Thanks so much. 🥰
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