The gales of Autumn swirl leaves of gold
on streets darkened by rain, sleet falls cold
grasses shiver in the wind, waves of emerald green
colored leaves dapple this pastoral scene
wind chimes dance as a bell tolls the hour
Michigan weather most dour
© Colleen M. Chesebro
Many thanks to Kim from Writing in North Norfolk, and dVerse, where we were to include the word “bell” in our 44 word, quadrille.
I had fun with end rhymes and the more I use them, the more comfortable I feel. It’s a cold, windy/rainy day in Michigan. 🎃
A familiar scene portray in excellent poetic piece. 😊👍
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Thanks Susan. Those winds are howling today!
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I’m right here with you! Michigan weather is most dour, but we’ll have a little Indian summer by week’s end.
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I saw that! 70 degress… we’ll all be outside living it up before it’s too late. LOL! It’s great to know another Michigander (along with Lisa) write here. 🍁
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Beautiful imagery, Colleen! But sleet?! Brrrrr.
We had a big thunderstorm last night, but it’s beautiful here today.
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Just a bit of sleet and then it’s gone. More rain today. The wind is really kicking up! Northern Michigan got a foot of snow!
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Yikes. I am not ready for winter weather.
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I know… I bought some fur lined leggings to wear for walking. I feel better if I can get outside.
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I have some lined leggings, too.🙂
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Gotta stay warm some how.
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Fun and cold, Colleen:) still warm and dry here.
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It’s definitely early for us, Denise. I fear it will be a cold winter. I read when the west coast is still hot. Yikes!
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I hope it doesn’t get too cold for you. I’m over the heat…lol
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I bet. It’s been crazy weather everywhere!
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It sure has!
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It is absolutely a Michigan day, weather-wise! 😉 xx oo
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I’ll say! Between the wind and the rain, it’s cold. Brrr.
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Colleen, the rain has made it pretty dismal pretty fast.
Summer lingered long
but in a moment packed up
and now is long gone…
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It’s still raining and windy here. Hopefully it moves on.
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Still raining here and I had a 10-hour power outage yesterday, from about 3pm – about 1 am 😦
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OH no!! That’s terrible. I heard you guys got snow. Did it knock out the power?
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We didn’t get any snow. Trees, it’s always the trees. God knows I love them, but in this area they are falling down or apart 😦 And we have full-time crews that are out trimming them. Why they don’t bury the power lines is a mystery to me. They had no trouble digging everything up around here to lay down natural gas (i.e. fracking) lines over the past few years.
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Luckily, our neighborhood has buried power lines. I can’t imagine what a pain this must be.
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Great use of colour and deft painting of the scene, Colleen. I am one of those people who love autumn and windy, rainy weather – and, of course, bells and wind chimes.
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It’s been wild and windy here all day.
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We’ve been very lucky with the weather over the past few days. I’m dreading winter, especially with the threat of blackouts.
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Oh my goodness. We have been very frugal with the heat here in my part of Michigan. I hear we will have a 25% increase in gas heating costs. I fear it will be worse for my friends in Europe. 💜
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Our dour weather hasn’t set in yet, but it’s right around the corner, lurking.
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Yikes! Be on the lookout. Brrr 🥶
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I can feel that wind…(K)
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Whew! It was howling!
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A bell to bring winter. Fun poem.
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Thanks for reading, Bill. I appreciate your comments. 😀
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I’m quite comfortable in gloomy weather. I hope there’s nothing wrong with me. Of late, everyday here is the same. Shine in the morning, rain really hard in the afternoon, and shine again at sunset for the last hr. It’s gorgeous and has been like this for the past 2weeks.
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It appears you were born to rhyme. hehe.
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LOL! This is so difficult for me. If you only knew how long it took me. 😆
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haha, syllabic poetry definitely takes longer.
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LOL! For me, the rhymes take longer. LOL!
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Oh, that’s nice. We’re windy and cold. It’s about 39F. and the word snow has been used for today’s weather. YIKES, that’s early!
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Had hailstone rain yesterday. Was cool though I feared for windshields of vehicles.
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Oh, yeah. Hail is nothing to mess with. At least you’re in your rainy season now? Right? You need to teach us more about where you live. 💜
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In time I will be able to do it justice. When I can take the photos.
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You will, no worries. 💜
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Beautiful poem, Colleen! We woke up to some chilly weather and as of 9:40 am, it is 37 F and windy, here in north Georgia. Tonight, they are forecasting a hard freeze. Brrr 🌬
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We’re 39 degrees, it rainy, windy, and cold here too. BRR! Stay warm. ❄️
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Hot chocolate time!
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Oh Yum! ☕️
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That will be Oregon weather before long, Colleen. A wonderfully sensory quadrille and you made the rhyme look easy! Cuddle up with a cup of tea, my friend.
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I’m doing a last edit my book. The unicorn cats want to play, so there’s lots of fun time. 💜
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😀 I can’t wait for the read. ❤
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You’re so sweet, Diana. Thank you. 🦄
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Whether winter’s approaching or not, its sweltering here! Nice poem 🙂
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LOL! I love that we’re from all around the world. Just think of all the weather we virtually visit in a day! 😀
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Oh, I can feel the chill!😊 It’s a bit nippy here today as well…kept waiting for it to warm up some😊. But, no!
Pat
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It’s that time of year. I heard by this weekend we will have Indian Summer, 70 degrees F. Wowser!
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😃
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Oh, I can feel the chill!😊 It’s a bit nippy here today as well…kept waiting for it to warm up some😊. But, no!
Pat
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What a beautiful poem, Colleen. Thanks for a imagery filled glimpse of your weather.
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Thanks so much. It’s a typical autumn in Michigan. 🍁
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You are welcome.
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Some enjoy those cold and nasty Michigan late autumn days. I’ll keep my lack of those in return for our warm summer days of our air conditioned ones. Note that I’ve gone off and left my snow shovels in Nebraska and New Hampshire.
Nice rhyme, I enjoyed reading those.
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Thanks Jim. On Thursday we had snow flurries. Yesterday, it was 65. Today on Saturday it will be 75 degrees! It’s crazy weather for sure. We used to call it Indian Summer… but I’m not sure that is the correct term now.
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