Eugi selected the theme of “the gray scarf” for this week’s #TankaTuesday #ThemePrompt. I asked for a story poem which I think I told below.

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around my neck for warmth the gray scarf comforts me his death has set me free graveyard tears flow he gave me the gray scarf one anniversary a gift most cursory I know he cared today I start anew no more fairy tales all alone—I can't fail me and my scarf © Colleen M. Chesebro
A sad but freeing story!
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Thank you. It’s good to write in different genres. It shows we’re versatile.
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It is…. 🧡🍁🧡
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You can certainly feel the caring vibes here! ❤
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Thanks so much, Sis. It was a good theme. 💜
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A poignant story poem Colleen… And those treasured moments are gifts to cherish as that scarf holds comfort of his warmth..
Have a lovely weekend Colleen.. Enjoy your Thanksgiving Weekend ❤
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Thanks, Sue. I’m working on posts for my book tour which starts on Thursday! It’s busy days. Have a great weekend. 💜
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Good luck with your book tour Colleen…. Sending HUGS ❤
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Thanks Sue. It’s a ton of work but it will be worth it. 💜
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Just remember to give yourself some quality time too. 💕🥰💖
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Oh yes… I’m working on that part. LOL! 💜
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🙂 ❤
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You have captured the feeling of transition, Colleen, with beauty and dignity.
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Thank you, Rebecca. There was something about the gray scarf. I felt a widow wore it. A strong message came through!
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Beautiful done, Colleen.
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Thanks, Rebecca. 🥰
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A thought-provoking take on the prompt, Colleen.
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Thanks, Liz. I’m always so taken with how your blog looks. I copied you. Thanks for the inspiration. With the blog tour coming I’m trying to spiff and simplify things. 💜
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Oh, my goodness! Thank you for the compliment, Colleen!!
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You’re welcome. It’s well deserved.💜
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🙂
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An evocative poem Colleen
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Oh thank you. How are you feeling? Recuperating well? ❤️
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You’re most welcome! Each day I’m a bit better. Thanks 🙏🏼
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Good news. I’m glad to hear it. ❤️
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Thank you my friend
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You’re so welcome, Sadje. 🤗❤️
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😍
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There are always conflicting feelings in any relationship. (K)
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And the emotions when you lose someone you love are always mixed. That’s what I was going for.
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It came across perfectly.
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Thanks, Kerfe… sometimes I can’t get it all out. LOL!
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I like how you used the scarf here in each stanza. It’s a comfort to her and glad she has it as a symbol of past, present, and future ❤
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Yes… that’s what I was going for. The gray scarf spoke to me. I just felt a widow wore it and that he had given it to her. Thanks Lisa. I love when we understand each other’s poetry.
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My pleasure, Colleen.
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Beautiful! I love what you did with this theme prompt. 💖
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Thanks so much, Franci. It was a great prompt. I’ve been reading a book about poetry and story poetry written in free style and syllabic poetry is really catching on. I see so many possibilities… 💜
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Most welcome, Colleen. 💖
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very hard to put a positive spin on loss but you did it well with the gray scarf abhanga.
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Thanks, Jude. I really felt the scarf belonged to a widow. A few other poets connected that way as well. I love these prompts. 💜
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I know several widows… some carried on better than others.
Tough when memory loss sets in…
Also very tough to be a young widow (with or without children).
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Most definitely, Jules… 💜
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Yes to liberation.
A woman who was a victim of domestic abuse consulted an astrologer as her husband’s illness was draining her out further. The astrologer told her that all problems will end shortly. Surprisingly, the woman’s husband called up the astrologer to ask how much time he had to live. He could instantly connect his wife’s freedom to his departure.
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Wow! What a stunning story… I felt her past, present and future all wrapped up in the scarf.
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Thank you 😀
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I really love this it shows deep love 💜
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Thanks, Willow. I really felt this story from the gray scarf. I must be picking up some kind of vibes. 💜
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It’s really strange I think many of us felt the same 💜
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I think it was the color… see how color affects our perceptions?
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Yes indeed and grey is an in-between colour between black and white, yin and yan. 💜
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Great point, Willow!
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So much comfort in that gray scarf, a link to the past that will see her into the future. 🙂 Beautiful poem.
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Thanks, Diana. The gray scarf prompted such great poetry!
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It did. I love the way it inspired all sorts of poems.
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I loved all the creativity. Who knew a gray scarf would be this inspiring? LOL!
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heartfelt and moving.. nice job on the prompt Colleen. Ok I’m following you again.. lol 😂
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I’ve had the worst time following folks… half the time WP won’t let me click the follow button!
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I know it’s crazy.. such a drag! 💞
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