
I was never there, you know
just a ghost in the Burbs,
a falling star in the sky
of this America life.
I exist where time flows
with a legacy of speed
ever moving forward,
never backwards,
mirroring
the sunrise and sunset—
as the darkness falls.
Not Lost, found.
© Colleen M. Chesebro
I’m late, but I’m here! Merril’s at dVerse (yesterday) for Poetics: Are You Listening? She asks us to choose from the list below, at least two titles, and write a poem, including the exact words of the titles within the poem. The word order of the title must be retained, but you can punctuate the longer ones. The poem can be in any style or form, and you may also use a podcast title for your own title, if you would like.
Easy-peasy, right? I’m giving you prompt words. Now all you have to do is write a poem using them.
The Titles:
Articles of Interest: American Ivy
I Was Never There
Legacy of Speed
Not Lost
Pivot
Reveal: After Ayotzinapa
Rumble Strip
Serial
This American Life
Ghost in the Burbs
It’s good to see you here, Colleen!
Your theme was much like mine. I like how you worked in the prompt titles:
“just a ghost in the Burbs,
a falling star in the sky
of this America life.”
Thank you for joining in the prompt!
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I’ve been so busy, but I aim to show up here more often. Thanks so much, Merril. I still have to make some visits.
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You’re welcome, Colleen.
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Super poem. Well done!
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Thanks, E.C. The prompt was so inspiring.
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I loved this piece Colleen, so much beauty expressed in few delicate words. Well written my friend. Happy new year to you.🙂✌🏼❣️
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Rob, thanks so much! Happy New Year to you, as well. 🥰
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A lovely poem Colleen …. ‘ever moving forward’ has been my mantra for as long as I can remember. Happy New Year.
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Thank you, Helen. I feel the same way about ever moving forward.
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Wow, Colleen! This poem is so wonderful! The emotion and imagery that you used really helped to paint a picture in my mind. Thank you so much for sharing, and I hope the new year has been going well for you so far 🥰❤️
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Thanks so much. I’m really thrilled you enjoyed it. It’s kind of haunting for the new year, but somehow it works. 🥰
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You’re very welcome! I love haunts anytime of the year! It most certainly works! 😃
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LOL! I’ll definitely add more haunting this year. 😀 🙏🏻
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Yay! I can’t wait to see more 😍🥰
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👻 🏚️ LOL! Haunting emoji!
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Haha I love it! They should really make one 😃
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That is thought-provoking.
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Thanks, Jacqui. I stuck in the liminal spaces of time with some research. It keeps creeping into my poetry.
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This has a lovely rhythm Colleen. (K)
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Thanks, Kerfe. The podcast titles were inspiring.
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I love this Colleen. 🙂
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Thanks, Marje. I’ve been writing more freestyle poetry. I particularly like the combination of freestyle and syllabic poetry. ❤️
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Yes that’s a good combo, Colleen. 🙂
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Great closing being found in the end.
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Thank you. The podcast names were so fun to work into our poetry.
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Beautifully written. Very skillful take on the prompt.
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That was wonderful, Colleen. I love these lines: “just a ghost in the Burbs, / a falling star in the sky / of this America life.” And the last line is the perfect ending.
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Thanks, Diana. I love prompts like this. They work so well for freestyle poetry. You can hint at things without having to be so specific.
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