It seems I only ruminate over you in the darkness after I’ve awakened from an unsettling slumber. I’m never sure if what I’ve experienced is a dream or a nightmare.
But one thing is for sure. You belong to the night, tucked away inside the part of me that lives in my memories from long ago. What we once shared is long gone.
Yet, your arrival is like a cloud blocking the sunlight from a blue sky.
“Why are you here?” I ask the darkness.
“Happy Valentine’s Day,” he whispers.
“This year’s a different thing—I’ll not think of you,” I answer.
The glare of the light floods the room. A nurse stands beside me.
“Here you are, my dear. Let’s get you back to sleep.”
I take the meds and close my eyes…
But he’s still there in the shadows.
Merril’s at dVerse, the Poet’s Pub.
HERE IS THE PROSERY PROMPT LINE:
“This year’s a different thing, –
I’ll not think of you.”from Charlotte Mew, “I so liked Spring”

Oh, excellent, Colleen, and well-written! I really liked this one! Thank you for joining in. It’s great to see you here.
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Thanks so much, Merril. I’m juggling a few different hats lately, but I so wanted to write to your prompt.
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You’re welcome, Colleen!
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Very well done! Great use of the prompt!
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Thanks, Dwight. I wanted it spooky and a bit unsettling.
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I think you got that very well!
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Whew! Thank you!
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:>)
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Excellent prosery, Colleen! I was moved by it.
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Thanks Liz. I was going for spooky and unsettling. 😀
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Yes, I got the sense of an entire backstory there.
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Good. I always worry about that.
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I know the feeling!
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Whew… I need a poetic writers group. LOL! 😀
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Ooh spooky! I love it 🙂
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Yay! Paula, you got the spooky feeling I was after.
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Spooky…,
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Oh, good. You picked up on the vibe I was after.
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❤️
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He’s still lurking in the shadows is a good way of putting it. Not so easy to dispel oneself of such a curse. Well-done, Colleen.
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Thanks, Lisa. I saw her in a psych ward or an old fashioned insane assylum… I wanted this to feel unsettling, spooky, even.
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You’re very welcome.
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I’m stumped so far with this one. But yours is excellent! (K)
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Thanks, Kerfe. I know sometimes I can’t come up with anything either. And… you can’t force it.
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So far this week is not a writing one it seems…
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I think I’d take the greeting, even in the dark of night.
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I saw this woman in a psych ward, or even an old fashioned insane assylum. The mind plays tricks on us sometimes. My aim was spooky and unsettling. LOL!
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So poignant!
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Thanks Sadje. The mind plays tricks, sometimes, doesn’t it?
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It sure does.
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Captures the head-first hallucinations very well. Nicely done, Colleen.
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Thanks Jay… I saw her in a psych ward, or an old fashioned insane assylum.
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Nicely done, Colleen!
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Thanks so much, Kim.
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A great piece of writing My Friend. Love’s unwanted shadows so often creep from night’s darkness.
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Thanks, Geoff. I’m thrilled you enjoyed this piece.
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Really did. Have a wonderful day My Friend.
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Now that makes me happy. Thanks, Goff.
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Cheers. Enjoy.
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Some ghosts never lie still, do they?
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No… I find those interesting, like there’s a lesson there or something.
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Maybe if she was taken off the medication she’d find out what the lesson was…
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That was fantastic, Colleen! Poor girl can’t get a break. When she awakens, she’s haunted. With the drugs, she’s haunted. Great piece!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
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Thanks so much, Yvi. 🥰
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Beautiful use of the prompt, Colleen! Happy Valentine’s Day! 💝
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Thank you, Franci. Happy Valentines. 💝
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My pleasure, Colleen! 💝
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This is so beautifully written, Colleen! I loved reading it! I can so relate to the dream/nightmare part. – Umesh
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Thanks so much for your lovely comments. I appreciate you.
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This is spooky, Colleen. Loved the ending. 🙂
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I’m glad you enjoyed. That’s what I was going for… something kind of unsettling.
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