Shooting stars mind-map the journey,
darkness curls like smoke from a Beltane bonfire
healing flames cleanse and renew—
it’s a turning point,
the full flower moon eclipse
potent and transformative.
When the moon’s shadow passes,
step into your power and make positive changes.
© Colleen M. Chesebro
For dVerse, where “Quadrille #175 -Mapping Out Our Poems” is the challenge from De Jackson.
What’s a quadrille? Here’s what De says:
“Pen us a poem of exactly 44 words, not counting the title, and containing some form of the word map. Post your poem on your own blog, and link up using Mr. Linky below. Then travel around the blogisphere to read some of the best poets around. The Quadrille is open all week, so be sure to come back to read and write some more!”
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Published by Colleen M. Chesebro
An avid reader, Colleen M. Chesebro rekindled her love of writing poetry after years spent working in the accounting industry. These days, she loves crafting syllabic poetry, flash fiction, and creative fiction and nonfiction.
In addition to poetry books, Chesebro’s publishing career includes participation in various anthologies featuring short stories, flash fiction, and poetry. She’s an avid supporter of her writing community on Word Craft Poetry.com by organizing and sponsoring a weekly syllabic poetry challenge, called #TankaTuesday, where participants experiment with traditional and current forms of Japanese and American syllabic poetry.
Chesebro is an assistant editor of The Congress of the Rough Writers Flash Fiction Anthology & Gitty Up Press, a micro-press founded by Charli Mills and Carrot Ranch.
In January 2022, Colleen founded Unicorn Cats Publishing Services to assist poets and authors in creating eBooks and print books for publication. In addition, she creates affordable book covers for Kindle and print books.
Chesebro lives in the house of her dreams in mid-Michigan surrounded by the Great Lakes with her husband and two (unicorn) cats, Chloe & Sophie.
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“Shooting stars mind-map the journey,”
I always find it amazing the connection we have with the sun and stars, and how it triggers memories.
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I feel like we’re all looking for help with our journeys. Maybe that’s why people are turning toward nature for answers? But there’s something mystical there too, isn’t there?
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I snuck over here to post this so hopefully people won’t notice. https://www.vice.com/en/article/a37dxe/iphone-woman-waldmuller-1860-painting-the-expected-one
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I actually saw the painting on Apple News and saved it to use for the challenge. Of course, she’s holding a prayer book of some sort. But younger writers are captivated by the image. It’s fun to see the possibilities. 💜
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I did not realize prayer book.😬 Even though I have a couple small ones like that.🤦🏻♀️ So I researched. It is fun to see the possibilities, and I love how our lifetime influences the interpretation of art.
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It’s interesting to see how our modern eyes view the world, isn’t it?
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It absolutely is. Sometimes it ages me and sometimes it makes me feel very inexperienced.😅 May I ask a favor? Please direct me to an explanation of the double enead so I can link it to my Tanka Tuesday post? Thank you so much, Colleen.🌺
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I did a quick post. I’ll add the form to the cheat sheet where it’s more visible too. https://wordcraftpoetry.com/2023/05/02/the-double-ennead-for-the-around-the-campfire-journal/
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If there is one?
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A beautiful call to reenergize, Colleen!
I love the shooting stars and mind-mapping.
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Thanks, Merril. This eclipse on May 5th is very powerful.
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You’re welcome, Colleen!
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I adore the moon, and this poem. I do think she holds power, and we can find it.
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I agree. Just look at what la Luna can do with the tides… I think we respond to that energy!
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Colleen, this feels like a powerful ritual: “When the moon’s shadow passes, step into your power” and makes me wonder if there are those who practice it during times of eclipse. I also like the idea of shooting stars mapping the mind’s sky.
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I do several rituals during the day along with meditation. It does seem like a ritual and it could be. I love the nature based guidance we receive from the moon and stars.
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I love darkness and light, Colleen, and the alliterative ‘Beltane bonfire’ with its healing flames. I also like the way ‘it’s a turning point’ is the axis of your quadrille.
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Kim, thank you. I love this time of year. Now, if only Michigan would cooperate with the weather.
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Sounds like a plan! ❤
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Crazy energy. Lots of truths coming out.
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Cosmic mind-mapping is just what we need! (K)
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Thanks, Kerfe. Maybe we will find ourselves in the stars?
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I’d enjoy that.
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I must be stuck on stars… my poem for #TT had stars in it too.
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A wonderful affirmation: step into your power and make positive changes.
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Thanks, Grace. I like affirmations. They keep me moving forward.
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Beautiful, inspiring poem
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Thanks so much, Sadje. 🙏🏻💛
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You’re welcome
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Beautiful quadrille, Colleen! The moon and stars are so magical and empowering. 💖
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I love the magic the night sky weaves. Quadrille are always a fun write. Thanks for reading.
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I love the last line step into your power, Colleen 🙂 xo
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The eclipse on May 5th is powerful. We all need to step into our power and become our authentic selves. ❤️
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Great inspiration in solitude!
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Thanks, Heidi. I like the quiet.
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Me too! I need it to think!😊
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Right? I’m right there with you, my friend. 🫶🏻
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Even if we cannot comprehend the map I am all in support of positive changes,
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Thanks, Bjorne. Sometimes the path isn’t clear until we make the positive changes. That’s been my experience.
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The heavens are mysterious but beautiful at night!!
You echoed that wonderfully for my tastes.
BTW, thanks for publishing De’s directions, she had directions in two places today, I chose the wrong one and it didn’t tell to use the word. So I walked around map following or in my mine, take your choice, but didn’t use it. I fixed it, she caught me!! (Here are the directions in another place, “Write all over the map. Be a mapmaker. Whatever form [of the word]* you choose, just be sure your poem is mapped out at just 44 words.)
* I swear these three words weren’t in it up there until I messed up. This was the first time I insinuated the word but left if physically out. Never again!!
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Jim, don’t feel bad. I’ve done the same thing on another challenge. I left the word out but talked all around it. It happens. Thanks for the lovely comments. Keep writing, my friend.
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Just magical Colleen 🌟
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Thanks, Angela.
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I absolutely love this! And so timely. (Though it’s been Samhain where I am.)
Blessed be!
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And a blessed Samhain to you! It’s a magical time of year, either way! 🫶🏻
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“When the moon’s shadow passes…” yes, one needs to get the timing right. How lovely, Colleen. Love this. Great poem. 👏
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Thanks, Selma. 🌸
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