The Carrot Ranch April 10, 2023, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story about “the old lady and the beast.” What does age have to say about the story? Who is the beast and why? Go where the prompt leads!
Submit by April 15, 2023. Please use the form on the post if you want to be published in the weekly collection. The Collection publishes on the Wednesday following the next Challenge. Stories must be 99 words. Rules & Guidelines.
The old woman crouched in the corner of the room. She felt the hot breath of the beast on the back of her neck.
His pursuit of her never wavered. She’d been running for so long. Nights were the worst. That’s when she understood there was no mercy from the decisions she’d made when she was young. Now, she was tired and desired peace.
“Beast, leave me!”
Silence. She stayed in the safety of the corner.
When the alarm sounded, she relaxed. The heavy barred prison doors rolled open.
“Line up for chow,” yelled the guard.
Another day began.
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An avid reader, Colleen M. Chesebro rekindled her love of writing poetry after years spent working in the accounting industry. These days, she loves crafting syllabic poetry, flash fiction, and creative fiction and nonfiction.
In addition to poetry books, Chesebro’s publishing career includes participation in various anthologies featuring short stories, flash fiction, and poetry. She’s an avid supporter of her writing community on Word Craft Poetry.com by organizing and sponsoring a weekly syllabic poetry challenge, called #TankaTuesday, where participants experiment with traditional and current forms of Japanese and American syllabic poetry.
Chesebro is an assistant editor of The Congress of the Rough Writers Flash Fiction Anthology & Gitty Up Press, a micro-press founded by Charli Mills and Carrot Ranch.
In January 2022, Colleen founded Unicorn Cats Publishing Services to assist poets and authors in creating eBooks and print books for publication. In addition, she creates affordable book covers for Kindle and print books.
Chesebro lives in the house of her dreams in mid-Michigan surrounded by the Great Lakes with her husband and two (unicorn) cats, Chloe & Sophie.
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28 thoughts on “In the Belly of the Beast, #99-word story”
One of my brothers, currently in year 7 of his 25 years-to-life murder sentence could relate to this , I’m sure. I can, too, but not as intently. Thanks for sharing.
These flash fiction pieces are like poetry to me… they give a quick story that captures a few moments in time. If you’re wondering, I feel like I did a good job. LOL!
It’d be worse if she wasn’t haunted by guilt and remorse I suppose. So she must have done a bad bad thing, yet you have your readers feeling for her. Well done!
This is very sad, Colleen. Beautifully penned.
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Thanks, Robbie. I worked on the wording of this story almost all week. I’d hoped to finally get it right. 🙏🏻
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You did get it right.
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Thank you.
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One of my brothers, currently in year 7 of his 25 years-to-life murder sentence could relate to this , I’m sure. I can, too, but not as intently. Thanks for sharing.
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The inner beast of doubt, Colleen, well done. Makes me wonder why she was in prison.
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These flash fiction pieces are like poetry to me… they give a quick story that captures a few moments in time. If you’re wondering, I feel like I did a good job. LOL!
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*applause* an excellent write, Colleen ❤
~David
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Thank you David. 🙏🏻
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I like that you left so much unsaid for us to both imagine and identify with. (K)
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Thank you, Kerfe. I’ve been working on not saying too much. Your poetry has taught me that. 🙏🏻
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I think the teaching goes both ways.
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Very sad story.
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It hits you in the gut… I think. Guilt is a terrible thing. Thanks for reading Sadje. 🙏🏻
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It sure is. You’re welcome my friend
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Thanks, Sadje. 💜
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🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼
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Beautifully written Colleen ❤️
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Thanks so much, Angela. 🙏🏻
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Powerful stuff, Colleen. What a haunting story. There’s no reprieve from some choices.
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Guilt is such a powerful emotion. Thanks for reading, Diana.
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Powerful and sad, Colleen!
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Thanks, Denise. 🙏🏻
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Wow! You really captured her angst. Great story, Colleen!
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Thanks, Yvi.
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It’d be worse if she wasn’t haunted by guilt and remorse I suppose. So she must have done a bad bad thing, yet you have your readers feeling for her. Well done!
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Thanks, D. I feel like my character creation is evolving. Yay!
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